feedback

Had a meeting with my writing group early this afternoon and received comments on Chapters 3 and 4. It was a great meeting. I really received some great feedback for improvement, as well as some nice compliments. There's a lot of food for thought floating around in my head right now. If I can figure out a way to harness it all, it can really bring this novel to a whole new level. I'm off to splash around in characterization and stretch out and soak up some language.